Thursday, February 28, 2008

Resident Poet

Our literature today covered several poems with the theme 'imagination'. One of the activities was to write their own imagination poem. H wrote his. Pretty good, I must say, mashaallah! He has improved a lot in one year, though his handwriting could use more attention to punctuation and be more legible. But I guess all that reading pays off, alhamdulillah.

Jannnah Life
My imagination said one day
"Take my hand lets fly away",
So off we went to fly,
in the mornin' sky,
my imagination told me"hurry up!",
so I went faster than a pup
up,up,up!,
finally we were there,
faster than a zippy bear,
in a place bad people don't go,
in this magnificent place obedient people go,
where I see
people don't pee,
in this life
people don't use the knife,
Jannah is the life!

By H

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hmmm... Thumbs UP for H.... :-)

adibah

Nadia said...

hehe alhamdulillah...dia (H) pulak naik syok buat poem..:D

Anonymous said...

Amoi,

Terer nya Hamzah buat poem.. aku pun tak leh nak come up with such a beautiful poem tau... tak tau buat poem pun... my highest respect for you... ur able to mould ur children to become good writers... i wish i have the patience and ability to do that... again, tabik!

Anonymous said...

amoi,

can i copy and paste hamzah's poem on my blog? of course, all the credit goes to him... btw, how old is he? i want to post an entry about him...

Nadia said...

dia 8..hehehe..alah...nanye dia try hard sgt nak rhymekan poem dia tu..so nampakla cam forced skit..aku ckp dgn dia poem tu takyah rhyme sbb kalau nak rhymekan gak it will sound forced..tp kasi encouragement la gak ni :P sbb beriye2 and bersusah payah dia tulis :D