Jannnah Life
My imagination said one day
"Take my hand lets fly away",
So off we went to fly,
in the mornin' sky,
my imagination told me"hurry up!",
so I went faster than a pup
up,up,up!,
finally we were there,
faster than a zippy bear,
in a place bad people don't go,
in this magnificent place obedient people go,
where I see
people don't pee,
in this life
people don't use the knife,
Jannah is the life!
By H
My imagination said one day
"Take my hand lets fly away",
So off we went to fly,
in the mornin' sky,
my imagination told me"hurry up!",
so I went faster than a pup
up,up,up!,
finally we were there,
faster than a zippy bear,
in a place bad people don't go,
in this magnificent place obedient people go,
where I see
people don't pee,
in this life
people don't use the knife,
Jannah is the life!
By H
5 comments:
Hmmm... Thumbs UP for H.... :-)
adibah
hehe alhamdulillah...dia (H) pulak naik syok buat poem..:D
Amoi,
Terer nya Hamzah buat poem.. aku pun tak leh nak come up with such a beautiful poem tau... tak tau buat poem pun... my highest respect for you... ur able to mould ur children to become good writers... i wish i have the patience and ability to do that... again, tabik!
amoi,
can i copy and paste hamzah's poem on my blog? of course, all the credit goes to him... btw, how old is he? i want to post an entry about him...
dia 8..hehehe..alah...nanye dia try hard sgt nak rhymekan poem dia tu..so nampakla cam forced skit..aku ckp dgn dia poem tu takyah rhyme sbb kalau nak rhymekan gak it will sound forced..tp kasi encouragement la gak ni :P sbb beriye2 and bersusah payah dia tulis :D
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